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Hi
I don't know if this is the right place to ask such, since it doesn't relate to EO or fanart in general at all. I hope it's fine still.

Recently I received a code that gives me a cup for free, which I can edit myself. I decided to give it to my sister as a birthday present. The birthday is on the 10.08 (DD.MM), so it's fairly soon.
I tried it by myself, but i realized that I don't have the technical device, nor the skill tbh. I could draw it, and make a photo, but even after the software editing, which I don't have the skill for, it looks just not good enough.

A clean drawing without colours is totally fine, but if you think it's better that way, you can of course colour it. The cup offers only a limited space for the personal editing, so please remember that when doing background or something. The cup is white btw.

This is my attempt. I want to keep the pose and the general idea. Everything else should be polished. The most important thing is, that it follows this mangastyle, I tried to implement.

It won't be a problem if the present is delayed for a few days. The delivery service isn't confident anyway.
Feel free to ask anything.

that's really cute

but what are you asking for specifically? for someone to clean that image up so it looks better on the cup?

That's something the artist can decide. He/she could strictly stay on my version and just polishing it, or making something else in the same style.
I would prefer the latter. Main things, that should be considered are the style and the pose. By style I mean this plain and cartoonish depiction of a character, commonly used in comedy anime shows.