Here you go! Chapter 5. As requested by garrett, I was able to add Dangerus again. It's been two chapters, right? Chapter 5: A Porcelain Garden... hides a slimy beast. ----- “Ms. Ortega! Mr. Ulrick! Let’s go exploring!” Snowbelle giggled. This was the first time Snowbelle addressed Ulrick for a whil...

The only feedback I have is confusion towards Ebonezer's role in the story. I assumed initially he would just be a backstory character, but it looks like he might be a main antagonist? I think it'd be better for the Dangerus guild to be the main (if not often seen) antagonist, but it is your story ...

well, the things with 'changing classes' was a bit of a cheap thing to me. It struck me as the game telling me 'change X class, obtain better grimoire stone and change them back to what the MUST be' In fact, the grimoire stones do come across a little like a way of making the pre-set characters omn...

Ha! What I really want to see now is more hints on Quinn's insidious side. So far, your characters are more diverse than in EOU. Even EOU2. Though, it would be nice if there was a rival guild. Possibly like Ren and Tchlatga, except not as threatening? No plans for a rival guild so far, but I can sp...

Due to me fangirling about Legend of Legaia, here is a topic relating to it so I can avoid mentioning it again outside of this topic area. This game was my gateway to other JRPGs. It's a Playstation 1 Game, and unfortunately I no longer have the game in my possession due to it finally breaking down ...

EO2 has class-only passage is exist, fixed party can't explore it. At least party create is available after 2nd Stratum. Exploring only 1st Stratum, but other Stratum unlocked after beat boss. That's actually true! Though... What will people do with the lack of other classes? And certain quests whe...

I am just about ready to start Chapter 5. If you want to give feedback, now is your chance, so I can edit Chapter 5 before I post it! Edit: we finally delve into Adam and Isami's stories. Also, there is a possible character death. I am trying to be as SFW as I can, but there is some mature themes in...

Ha! What I really want to see now is more hints on Quinn's insidious side.

So far, your characters are more diverse than in EOU. Even EOU2.

Though, it would be nice if there was a rival guild. Possibly like Ren and Tchlatga, except not as threatening?

Heavens, if you compare U to 1, QUINN makes all these decisions in the original, if you take it precisely, while in U he's reduced (as stated elsewhere) to a yes-man towards Visil, who first needs to get inspired by the Highlander's gloriousness to think for himself. Oh Quinn... How I've always loa...

I think the story telling in EOU doesn't really know what it wants to be. There's no real world- or character-building for the heroes, everything happens solely because 'the story demands it'. Characters are in places where they have no reason being, decisions are made with absolutely no basis, and...

@ Fluffernuff What I meant is that your guild in Untold is different from the others right from the beginning. Because the Highlander is OMG so specialawesome and super important mysterious girl and library team and whatnot. Of course you're the one who gets to beat the big bad, but in the regular ...

Ouch, let's hope Atlus gets their stuff together till they remake 3 and do a good job. (meanwhile I'm over in the gallery, writing my version of eo1/u) Yes. Let's. Release date is November 27th! New character (Voiced by: Yu Kobayashi) http://i1331.photobucket.com/albums/w583/TempestTales/EOU2NewCha...

Wolkenritter: Completely unchanged? Tell that to my face. Or better tell that to Dr Hoffman's face and then come back and tell that to Tlachtga's face that removing her worries for Ren and stuff is 'not changing anything of the game' Tell me to my face that adding in a half-arsed excuse of a quest ...