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Thanks Trif, there's a lot of issues with it but my practice is paying off. (I guess it's good that I can see them?) Most of the big problems are flow, but that's partly from a lack of re-doing things and partly from squishing all that set-up into as few pages as possible.

I shouldn't have as much of a problem with my Incendium comic that I have as many pages as I want to work with, but I do have to watch my speech-bubble placement and framing and flow n' junk. Still, improvement. Thanks for the support.

I have not the slightest idea. That idea is not the slightest I have.

zamsk

is the reason for anorak waiting until night to go in the water because he is so dirty that all of his body is black to the point of looking like a silhouette

Where did the name Anorak come from? Reminds me of Ready Player One.

Oh! Huh. I didn't know any of that. Dx

Yeah, the 'geek/otaku' meaning seems to be little known outside Britain.

Yup, they all have crappy french names, I didn't put much thought into this. I drew him as a silhouette because I didn't decide why he was wearing the parka. Maybe he's disfigured. Maybe he's insecure about having no hair. Maybe he's the Ice King and would melt without the insulation. Actually, that's canon now.

you confirmed its a guy

Oh, I meant they. I honestly haven't decided and probably never will

Oh. Well, everyone should still read Ready Player One.

Head out to walk to work -> ice everywhere



There is great pleasure to be had knowing that this ice brings great suffering to humanity. I myself actually like ice. It is as beautiful as it is fascinating.